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In The Prime Of Death
You'll Find No Rest
You Can Only Second Guess
If You Passed Or Failed This Test
In This Time
Life Yours And Mine
In Body And Mind
Our Souls Intertwine
This Is Why We Tend To Inquire
On The Need For Love And Why It's So Dire
A Lover For Hire
Life Treading On A Wire
Ringing Out The Voice Of The Choir
All God's Children To Be Coverd In Mire
A Whim And A Dream Is All I Require
To Give Up And Surrender My Heart To The Fire
So Take My Dysphoric Hand
And Look Across These Lands
And Try To Understand
If This All Along Was The Surrogate Plan
You'll Find No Rest
You Can Only Second Guess
If You Passed Or Failed This Test
In This Time
Life Yours And Mine
In Body And Mind
Our Souls Intertwine
This Is Why We Tend To Inquire
On The Need For Love And Why It's So Dire
A Lover For Hire
Life Treading On A Wire
Ringing Out The Voice Of The Choir
All God's Children To Be Coverd In Mire
A Whim And A Dream Is All I Require
To Give Up And Surrender My Heart To The Fire
So Take My Dysphoric Hand
And Look Across These Lands
And Try To Understand
If This All Along Was The Surrogate Plan
THis is kinda something that I've been working on fer about...4...5 days. I had written abunch of four lined things, and they seemed alright, I just needed to have them make alittle bit of sense, there was alot of adding, taking away, and re-arranging in this whole poetry process...I'll probably end up re-writing this...so...expect to see a better..or worse...version later...
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I like this, not a fan of rhyming, but none the less impressive and emotional. Really neat Mabre good job. 